Pilot Presentation Pitch
Presentation Script
Cue Cards
Audience Handout
To understand my Audience's opinions on my idea and pitch for my FMP, I printed out 5 of these feedback sheets to hand to random people attending my Presentation Pitch. After printing them out, I was told I did not need them so none of them got filled out. My feedback was given verbally instead.
Video Commentary of Presentation Pitch
Pitch Review
On the day the pitch presentations took place, I was busy filming for my friend's project. This means that I missed out on presenting my project live. Instead, I recorded my narrations to put over a video of my Pitch Presentation. I believe this helped with my confidence for showcasing my idea, as I was not put under the stressful environment of talking to an audience. Because I did not share my idea live, I could not get feedback on my handout sheets. Therefore, I asked my friends to give me verbal feedback over teams and messenger on what they thought about my idea and pitch.
Feedback
Reoccurring criticism for my presentation video was the length of it. In a real life circumstance, the person in the receiving end of the presentation would lose interest after 2 minutes. My presentation is 7 minutes long. The importance of having a client listen to the whole idea is crucial. If the most exciting news is at the end of the presentation, the client may decide they are too bored to carry on before you have even reached the best information. Next time I am faced with presenting a pitch, I will cut down on the script and include the most important sections and sentences. This will keep the Audience engaged and make the idea more believable that the watchers would enjoy it.
LIKES:
DISLIKES:
When it came to the idea my pitch was based on, my Audience liked the idea. Not much awareness or knowledge has been shared about Autism, they are willing to learn more about the subject. A particular piece of feedback I got, was that they love the idea of interviewing both my Mother and Sister, but they believe the documentary should be more focused on Steph. This is because, I'm raising awareness on Autism, so its best to focus on the personnel suffering with it. I agree with the feedback to an extent. I want to include my Mother in the documentary as a way of introducing how Steph is perceived by a 'normal' person. I want her to represent the Audience in my Film. However, I will be sure to keep the focus on Stephanie as she is the main showcase.
